The maps below shows the town of Lynnfield in 1936 and then later in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The maps below shows the town of Lynnfield in 1936 and then later in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In the first map,In year 1936,the farm land was build near the government offices.In west area of town,grow three trees.The north of the town , there was three shops such as post office, sweet shops,and butchers. The flower shop,bank,and library was bulit of the south Area.
According to the second map,the government offices and farm land respectively replace by museum and golf course in year 2007. The cycle path change into road. Moreover,the few tree was cut down and river was also converted into residential Area. The north of town,sweet shops and butchers was replaced by a large supermarket. Flower shop developed into travel agent. Superasingly, there was changed in the location of the post office,bank,and library.
Overall,the modern facilities was developed for the growth of the town but it has harmed the environment.
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